pinkie9
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- Nov 25, 2010
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- Japanese
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- Japan
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- Japan
For the context, please assume that someone researched how many students of a university have experience in donating their blood, by year and by blood type.
Sheet 1 of the attached file shows the data on the male students and Sheet 2 (shows) those of the female students.
Can I omit the second “shows” in this case? (I think I sometimes see expressions like that.)
Would the sentence be better if I omit it because I can avoid the redundancy of repeating the same verb twice in that way?
Or, would it be better not to omit it because the meaning of the sentence would be clearer in that way?
Which is better? Thank you.
Sheet 1 of the attached file shows the data on the male students and Sheet 2 (shows) those of the female students.
Can I omit the second “shows” in this case? (I think I sometimes see expressions like that.)
Would the sentence be better if I omit it because I can avoid the redundancy of repeating the same verb twice in that way?
Or, would it be better not to omit it because the meaning of the sentence would be clearer in that way?
Which is better? Thank you.