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Do228

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Which verbs can be used here instead of "walking by"?

struting
parading
sashaying
stalking
flouncing



Vivi who had won every single beauty contest she had ever taken part in, was by far the most coveted woman in the neighborhood and far beyond. She walking by, smiling and waving her long hair got all men twisted and dreaming of having a fling with her.
 

jutfrank

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I'll point out that the second sentence is ungrammatical so they're all wrong. If you can correct it, someone might answer.
 

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Perhaps you could use a different subject.
 
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