arnold23
New member
- Joined
- Jul 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- El Salvador
- Current Location
- El Salvador
Hello friends
I'm new in this forum and I wanted to get help please reviewing a phrase in which I've been working:
God leads my path, my family upholds
my decisions and my loving mother...
I am grateful for all that I am, for I owe
it to my mother's sacrifice.
I would like to know your opinions in regards of its composition, as a non native speaker of english I still have my doubts about the overall composition of the phrase and its grammar and punctuation. I'm doing it for a friend who wants to surprise his mother. If you find something to improve or anything, I would really appreciate the feedback.
See you soon friends and thanks beforehand.
I'm new in this forum and I wanted to get help please reviewing a phrase in which I've been working:
God leads my path, my family upholds
my decisions and my loving mother...
I am grateful for all that I am, for I owe
it to my mother's sacrifice.
I would like to know your opinions in regards of its composition, as a non native speaker of english I still have my doubts about the overall composition of the phrase and its grammar and punctuation. I'm doing it for a friend who wants to surprise his mother. If you find something to improve or anything, I would really appreciate the feedback.
See you soon friends and thanks beforehand.