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ALI raghib

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One day Annie Soralli came quickly to the dressing-room with white afraid face. And she was shouting for her friends to close the door, because she saw a ghost in the passage, also she saw his face. Everybody get shocked and immediately they close the door. But, a tall girl said that there is no ghost and it is only a shadow on the wall. Another girl said that Joseph Buget saw him last week, he was a tall wearing a black evening coat, has a head of a dead man without nose, only a holes. However, Magy said don’t talk about him and one-day joseph will regret about his actions. The girls asked Magy for more explanation. Magy said that her mother knows about the ghost and the ghost don’t like the people who talk about him. The girls asked Magy form where your mother knows this information. Magy responded and said that her mother was talking to the ghost without seeing him in opera house, where the Box 5 was for the ghost, and he every day leaves some followers for her mother in Box 5. Magy again she said to the girls don’t talk about him, because he might be angry. From that time girls were speaking quietly about the ghost. After the performance, the girls went back to the dressing-room. A fat women with a white face enter the room quickly, to tell the girls about the death of Joseph in 4[SUP]th[/SUP] floor with a rope around his neck.
 

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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

What are you going to do with this essay when it's ready?
 
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