Please find attached the proposal

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"Please find attached the proposal, which includes a special discount as a thank you for your patience while we responded to you, as well as all of the specifics."
 

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What is the proposal for?
 

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"Please find attached the proposal, which includes a special discount as a thank you for your patience while we responded to you, as well as all of the specifics."
I suppose there was some sort of delay. Anyhow, I would put a period (full stop) after patience.
 

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It's a PV offer.
I can't believe we're still having to remind you that it's not an offer. It's a QUOTE!
 

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I can't believe we're still having to remind you that it's not an offer. It's a QUOTE!
In my country, we call it offer, sorry!
 

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Cause I'm explaining in the PFD all the details, how the company has grown. how we install and how the PV works.
 

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Because I'm explaining in the PFD (do you mean "PDF"?) all the details, how the company has grown, how we install the installation process, and how the PV works.
I don't know why you started that sentence with "Because" (note that "Cause" is not an acceptable substitute in written English). It would be OK if someone had asked you a question that started with "Why" but no one did.
 
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