[Grammar] Please help correcting letter to payroll

[bhatt]

Dear Stevan

I have not been paid my shift allownces in month of August. I would be grateful if you look into matter and solve it

regards
Bhatt

 

[gurpreetgill4u]

I am not a teacher.

I have not been paid my shift allowance for the month of August.I will/would be grateful if you look into this matter and solve it.

Would is more polite than will.

I am not a teacher.

 

[teechar]

Dear Stevan,

I have not been paid my shift allowances [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] for the month of August. Please look into this serious matter and let me know the outcome. [STRIKE]I would be grateful if you look into matter and solve it[/STRIKE]

(My best) regards,

Bhatt

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