[Grammar] Pre-employment test

[marner]

Hi all

This is my first post on this forum, I did read the rules but if I still did something wrong and break the rules I apologize for this..I'm not sure if I post this thread in the right place.
I was assigned the Pre-employment test which is an English level evaluating test. and in the final sections I have three images which I have to describe in five sentences each.

I need some help from native English speaker to correct my descriptions because I'm sure there will be a lot of mistakes, any logical or spelling corrections are welcome

here is the requirement:
For each of the following images, using exactly 5 sentences, please describe the image (taking care not to give an opinion on the images just a description).

here goes the images:

image 1:

image 2:

image 3:

and the descriptions I wrote for each of them:

image 1 description:

1. A cute Robot with a rounded body, two arms and antenna on his head.

2. He is holding some sort of shredder machine.

3. A Picture with a flower goes through the machine.

4. The Robot is spinning the machine.

5. Machine cuts the picture in a small pieces with the same flower image on each of them

image 2 description:

1. A square-like blue tin can

2. The can is half opened

3. There is a computer keyboard in the can

4. The red flash light is shining on the keyboard

5. The keyboard is only partly seen image 3 description: 1. A pyramid like 3D objects with stairs one side and vertically colored triangles the other. 2. There are six colors on the painted side: orange, green, red, yellow, cyan, and purple 3. Painted triangles are not evenly spread, the yellow one is the smallest 4. A 2 dimensional human figure with 3 dimensional head 5. The human figure is going up the ----------------------------------------- any advice, correction would be greatly appreciated......

 

[Rover_KE]

Welcome to the forum, marner.

It looks to me like you are asking us to give you an unfair advantage over other candidates.