rephrase formally

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sieve

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How can the sentence below be rephrased to a formal sentence.
Or is it formal enough?
"We support the detailed explanation written in our previous letter."

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emsr2d2

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I would remove "written" (or change it to "given") and leave the rest alone. "We support the detailed explanation [given] in our previous letter" seems formal enough to me.
 
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