Scuba Diving

[Erbab]

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SCUBA DIVING​

Those who are interested in scuba diving sometimes ask each other whether it is dangerous or not. Of course it depends on the diver, because most of the danger results not from the diving but from the diver.

The diver is usually equipped with a mask consist of glass and rubber which prevents water from blurring his vision in scuba diving. Rubber foot-pallets provide/give him speed and durability/endurance. Because of the cold water, the diver wears a diving cloth which keeps him warm.

Most face masks have a short breathing tubes called snorkel. The diver breathes through/via this tube. If he wants to dive/go deeper, he takes a deep breath and dives/plunges. Scuba diving is generalley done in water 2 to 7 meters deep. Expert divers, however, with training and experience can go/dive much deeper.


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[teechar]

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SCUBA DIVING
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Those who are interested in scuba diving sometimes [STRIKE]ask each other[/STRIKE] wonder whether it is dangerous or not. Of course, it depends on the diver, because most of the danger results not from the diving but from the diver.

The diver is usually equipped with a mask [STRIKE]consist of[/STRIKE] made from glass and rubber which prevents water from blurring the diver's [STRIKE]his[/STRIKE] vision. [STRIKE]in scuba diving.[/STRIKE] Also, divers use rubber fins for greater agility and maneuverability under water. [STRIKE]foot-pallets provide/give him speed and durability/endurance.[/STRIKE] Because of the cold water, the diver wears a diving [STRIKE]cloth[/STRIKE] suit to [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] keep [STRIKE]him[/STRIKE] warm.

Most face masks have a short breathing tube attached, called a snorkel. The diver breathes through/via this tube. If [STRIKE]he[/STRIKE] the diver wants to dive/go deeper, [STRIKE]he[/STRIKE] they take a deep breath and dive.[STRIKE]/plunges.[/STRIKE] Scuba diving is generally done [STRIKE]in water[/STRIKE] at a depth of 2-7 meters. [STRIKE]deep.[/STRIKE] Expert divers, however, with training and experience can go/dive much deeper.


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Note that scuba diving is not the same as snorkeling.

 

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[teechar]

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