She smiled with a dismissive gesture.

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'Leave me out of this,' she smiled with a dismissive gesture.

Is that sentence correct? Or should I write it like this?

'Leave me out of this,' she smiled, making a dismissive gesture.
 

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I prefer "making a dismissive gesture". Also, it doesn't seem to me that a smile goes with that statement.
 

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"Leave me out of this" is a command (or a demand). Why would a person smile when saying that?
 
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