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Hi, there. I'm trying to write a script:
The officer steps in (from the hallway) and looks around the room, then suddenly snaps his head back/around toward the hall as if he heard something. Through an open doorway to another room, he sees... light outside. He runs out of the room...
Is 'snaps his head back toward the hall' correct and appropriate here if he turns his head around quickly and looks back toward the hall he just came from or should it be 'snaps his head around' or something else?
The officer steps in (from the hallway) and looks around the room, then suddenly snaps his head back/around toward the hall as if he heard something. Through an open doorway to another room, he sees... light outside. He runs out of the room...
Is 'snaps his head back toward the hall' correct and appropriate here if he turns his head around quickly and looks back toward the hall he just came from or should it be 'snaps his head around' or something else?