A sentence from a textbook:
"Since so much of economic and commercial activity could be banned if the legislature chose, this theory could authorize a ban on advertising these activities as well."
Shouldn't "chose" be preceded by "so"?
Thanks.
***** NOT A TEACHER *****
Good morning, Jasmin.
(1) I have been waiting for someone to answer you, for these fine points of English interest me, too.
(2) As I type this, nobody else has replied, so may I inform you of what I found out:
(a) First, a minor point:
Did you forget to type: this IN theory.....
(b) One very acknowledgeable person told me:
(i) Your use of "so chose" is fine.
(ii) He found 605 examples of "he so chooses" in books. google
(iii) He found 368 examples of "he chooses to do so" in books, google.
(iv) If I understood him correctly, he would rather recast your sentence something like (this is my idea -- not his):
Since the legislature could choose to ban so much commercial activity, this in theory could....
(c) I then received a communication from a lady who teaches English to many international students. Her views:
(i) The "so" is not necessary.
(ii) "so chose" is extra-formal.
(a) might be "jarring" to the ears for most people who are not accustomed to such elegant language.
(b) Some other constructions:
if the legislature chose to = most conversational; least formal.
if the legislature chose to so do = stilted; legalistic.
if the legislature chose to do so = more "natural sounding"; most "elegant" because not "jarring.."
I hope that I represented correctly the views of my two correspondents.
Have nice day!
P. S. I realize that this was not "your" sentence -- but one from a textbook.