topman85
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- Iran
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I have written something in English and now I'm trying to find out if my text is correct or native speakers think I write it correctly or not:
Summary of the game:
Year 2020…
The alien invasion demolished the entire earth…
NASA is activating its most top secret project that is spaceships which travel at the speed of light and is sending groups of people to the safe place out of the Earth.
Alice and Thomas who loves each other are going by one of these spaceships.
Suddenly on their way and in galaxy M87 huge gravity draws the spaceship towards its center, and eventually they collide to the surface of the black hole… But after all, this couple survives.
In part of the spaceship which has been collapsed the gravity is the same as on the Earth.
Alice and Thomas have thought they were alone, but they were not… they are with filthy and brutal beings.
Explanation of the process and future of the game:
This is the game to make you rich…
First of all I shall say it can revolt the industry of video games.
Because of being limited by budget we had to make the game 2D… But if we get supported we will release 3D version of the game of all platforms.
And it might interest you to know after selling the game everyone who had the most price ceiling for financial assistance (that has already been clarified) becomes a shareholder, and after releasing till the game is on he earns his profit from the income.
The Black Hole is an action, mystery and romantic game.
At first this game will be released for Windows, Linux, Android and IOS but in future also for PS4.
It's online and a two player game. It has two major characters, a man and a woman.
First of all you shall answer some questions about yourself… for example what kind of music do you like? What is your favorite food? What is your favorite color?
During the game and after passing each level there would be other questions to answer… Now you might ask what all these questions are for.
After you finish the game, due to your answers you will be introduced to someone like you…
Weapons and equipment of the game are so vital.
You need to provide weapons and equipment for your survive.
Dynamic and quick fight:
In addition to your own weapons, you can use your enemies' weapons too.
You will have different kinds of weapons.
Ancient weapons and modern weapons
Properties:
One of your most critical properties in this game is gold.
You can't pass the levels without gold.
You can collect gold if you're smart enough or get your gold and equipment by paying money.
Thank you all
Summary of the game:
Year 2020…
The alien invasion demolished the entire earth…
NASA is activating its most top secret project that is spaceships which travel at the speed of light and is sending groups of people to the safe place out of the Earth.
Alice and Thomas who loves each other are going by one of these spaceships.
Suddenly on their way and in galaxy M87 huge gravity draws the spaceship towards its center, and eventually they collide to the surface of the black hole… But after all, this couple survives.
In part of the spaceship which has been collapsed the gravity is the same as on the Earth.
Alice and Thomas have thought they were alone, but they were not… they are with filthy and brutal beings.
Explanation of the process and future of the game:
This is the game to make you rich…
First of all I shall say it can revolt the industry of video games.
Because of being limited by budget we had to make the game 2D… But if we get supported we will release 3D version of the game of all platforms.
And it might interest you to know after selling the game everyone who had the most price ceiling for financial assistance (that has already been clarified) becomes a shareholder, and after releasing till the game is on he earns his profit from the income.
The Black Hole is an action, mystery and romantic game.
At first this game will be released for Windows, Linux, Android and IOS but in future also for PS4.
It's online and a two player game. It has two major characters, a man and a woman.
First of all you shall answer some questions about yourself… for example what kind of music do you like? What is your favorite food? What is your favorite color?
During the game and after passing each level there would be other questions to answer… Now you might ask what all these questions are for.
After you finish the game, due to your answers you will be introduced to someone like you…
Weapons and equipment of the game are so vital.
You need to provide weapons and equipment for your survive.
Dynamic and quick fight:
In addition to your own weapons, you can use your enemies' weapons too.
You will have different kinds of weapons.
Ancient weapons and modern weapons
Properties:
One of your most critical properties in this game is gold.
You can't pass the levels without gold.
You can collect gold if you're smart enough or get your gold and equipment by paying money.
Thank you all