Teaching in school.

[sdgsdg]

Am I write correct?

First of all I'm not better at writting, however im working on it, thanks for giving this attempt, in terms of becoming a teacher personally officially I'm not authentic one, back to my family roots there are many individuals within my family are teachers including my father, other and two of my brother and none of them are official except my father who had been teaching for the last 40 years, only thing we have as a family is passion and dedication and strong faith in helping students who want to upgrade their education and those including family member, neighbors.

 

[Tarheel]

I guess you mean to say:

Is my writing correct?

Or

Is my writing good?

Unfortunately, there are numerous errors.

 

[Tarheel]

First, I am not good at writing. However, I'm working on it

When I see a "first" I always expect to see a "second". Why is that? Well, if there is no "second" it doesn't make sense to have a "first".

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

I'm not good at writing, but I'm working on it.

 

[Tarheel]

What do you mean by "official" there?

Some of that's too confusing for me to do anything with.

 

[Tarheel]

Many in my family are teachers -- including my father, my mother, and two of my brothers.

 

[Tarheel]

What do you mean by "official"?

**who has been teaching for the last 40 years

 

[tedmc]

Am I write correct?

First of all I'm not better at writting, however im working on it, thanks for giving this attempt, in terms of becoming a teacher personally officially I'm not authentic one, back to my family roots there are many individuals within my family are teachers including my father, other and two of my brother and none of them are official except my father who had been teaching for the last 40 years, only thing we have as a family is passion and dedication and strong faith in helping students who want to upgrade their education and those including family member, neighbors.

First things first. You have used only one full-stop for the whole paragraph, i.e. everything is in one sentence. Why do you want to do that? Write in shorter sentences.

 

[Tarheel]

I don't know what you mean when you say you want to help people upgrade their education.

Perhaps:

Our passion is education.

 

[sdgsdg]

I guess you mean to say:

Is my writing correct?

Or

Is my writing good?

Unfortunately, there are numerous errors.

Can I say,
Is my saying good?
Is my saying clear?

 

[sdgsdg]

What do you mean by "official" there?

Some of that's too confusing for me to do anything with.

Not working at school and they worked as a private teachers.

 

[sdgsdg]

back to my family roots there are many individuals within my family are teachers including my father, other and two of my brother and none of them are official except my father who had been teaching for the last 40 years.

Mother not included here , just my father and two of my brothers.(also me surely).

 

[emsr2d2]

Can I say the following?
1. Is my saying good?
2. Is my saying clear?

No. "Is my speech good/clear?"

 

[sdgsdg]

back to my family roots there are many individuals within my family are teachers including my father, other and two of my brother and none of them are official except my father who had been teaching for the last 40 years.

Mother not included here , just my father and two of my brothers.(also me surely).

You see the word other, look at it please, doesn't mean any relatives?

 

[Tarheel]

Can I say,
Is my saying good?
Is my saying clear?

No. Say: "Is my writing good?"

 

[Tarheel]

You see the word other, look at it please, doesn't IT mean any relatives?

No, it doesn't. Punctuation!

 

[Tarheel]

Not working at school and they worked as a private teachers.

I guess you mean they didn't teach at a school. Instead, they worked as tutors. The word "official" doesn't work at all.