Thank you for donating money to the charity

[Joj]

Thank you for donating money to the charity CancerDie through us.
Because the municipality failed to convert recycling trash into money to help cancer patients, you stepped in to contribute to our continued poverty.

When the volleyball team learned of the initiative to help cancer patients, they asked to donate their winnings to the foundation as well

 

[emsr2d2]

Do you have a question for us?

 

[Joj]

Do you have a question for us?

Is it clear ?

 

[Joj]

I want to post it on Instagram under a picture.

 

[Tarheel]

Thank you for donating money to the charity CancerDie through us.
Because the municipality failed to convert recycling trash into money to help cancer patients, you stepped in to help with our fundraiser.

When the volleyball team learned of the initiative to help cancer patients, they volunteered to donate their winnings to the foundation as well

Two things. One, I think there's room on the second line for "Because". Two, any questions?

 

[Joj]

Thank you for donating money to the charity CancerDie through us.
Because the municipality failed to convert recycling trash into money to help cancer patients, you stepped in to help with our fundraiser.

The volleyball team XX who won against YY with a score of 21/20, and the presenter of the match "XXX" volunteered to donate their winnings to the foundation as well.

( I have modified it a little bit.)

 

[Tarheel]

@Joj It needs a comma after XX and and after XXX.

(I have never encountered "presenter of the match" before.)