alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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The garden was surrounded by a brick wall. In the corner stood a red berry tree. The tree branches were laden with fruits, drooping towards the light blue-tiled ground which was dappled dark red by the carpet of trampled red berries.
The garden was surrounded by a brick wall. In the corner stood a red berry tree. The tree branches were laden with fruits, drooping towards the light blue-tiled ground which was dappled dark red by the carpet of trampled red berries.