The players and supporters of the fifth division club

Status
Not open for further replies.

Bassim

VIP Member
Joined
Mar 1, 2008
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Bosnian
Home Country
Bosnia Herzegovina
Current Location
Sweden
Have I made any mistakes?

The players and supporters of the fifth division club Union1923 reacted with anger when they heard that a foreign investor is going to buy their club. The club is embedded in the working-class community and its players are mostly the local lads, who play for joy and fun and not for profit. The change of the owner will be the end of their appearances and the start of commercialisation, which they believe will surely cause the club to lose its spirit and the sense of solidarity. In this tight-knit community, people rather watch their neighbours, friends and acquaintances play as amateurs than professional players, who will come to play only for money, having no interest in the community whatsoever.
 

Tarheel

VIP Member
Joined
Jun 16, 2014
Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
Have I made any mistakes?

The players and supporters of the fifth division club Union1923 reacted with anger when they heard that a foreign investor was going to buy their club. The club is embedded in the working-class community and its players are mostly the local lads, who play for joy and fun and not for profit. The change of ownership will be the end of their appearances and the start of commercialisation, which they believe will surely cause the club to lose its spirit and the sense of solidarity. In this tight-knit community, people would rather watch their neighbours, friends and acquaintances play as amateurs than professional players, who will come to play only for money, having no interest in the community whatsoever.

My suggestions.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top