hardyweineberg
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- Joined
- Jun 3, 2022
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Igbo
- Home Country
- Nigeria
- Current Location
- Nigeria
"The prices of female and male dress pants, at $75.66 and $71.71 respectively, were much higher than those of female and male dress shirts, which were 58.11 and 51.46 dollars respectively."
"The well-known store had 50 jeans, but the numbers of dress pants and dress shirts in the store were each 40."
"Jeans cost 62.75 dollars for men and 57.1 dollars for women, and the percent difference between these prices is 10%, compared to 13% for dress shirts and 6% for dress pants."
Source: me
1) Is the first sentence clear and grammatical?
2) Regarding the 2nd sentence, is the use of "numbers" and "each" grammatical?
3) Is "the percentage differences in prices" correct, or do I have to use "between" instead of "in"?
"The well-known store had 50 jeans, but the numbers of dress pants and dress shirts in the store were each 40."
"Jeans cost 62.75 dollars for men and 57.1 dollars for women, and the percent difference between these prices is 10%, compared to 13% for dress shirts and 6% for dress pants."
Source: me
1) Is the first sentence clear and grammatical?
2) Regarding the 2nd sentence, is the use of "numbers" and "each" grammatical?
3) Is "the percentage differences in prices" correct, or do I have to use "between" instead of "in"?
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