alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Are these good?
1. Cold air was blowing in through the window. She strode towards it, slammed it shut and turned the handle. The sounds of the noisy city vanished along with the cold, smoggy air.
2. They hiked until they reached the peak of the gentle mountain. Up there, they could see the vast city, thousands of specks of taillights melting together into flowing streams of red. But the sounds of the city had disappeared.
Also, what can I use instead of "the sounds of the city"?
1. Cold air was blowing in through the window. She strode towards it, slammed it shut and turned the handle. The sounds of the noisy city vanished along with the cold, smoggy air.
2. They hiked until they reached the peak of the gentle mountain. Up there, they could see the vast city, thousands of specks of taillights melting together into flowing streams of red. But the sounds of the city had disappeared.
Also, what can I use instead of "the sounds of the city"?
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