alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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The EKG machine stop beeping, and then Becca's mother flatlined. The world ended for Becca on that winter night in that damp hospital room. She knew she would never be happy.
The EKG machine stop beeping, and then Becca's mother flatlined. The world ended for Becca on that winter night in that damp hospital room. She knew she would never be happy.