[Grammar] They are published together in a shorter form than they were originally published.

Status
Not open for further replies.

kadioguy

Key Member
Joined
Mar 4, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
a. They are published together in a shorter form than they were originally published.

https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/italian-english/compendio

b. There is more food than is needed.

https://tinyurl.com/yxl3sdof (Google Books)

-----------

As you can see, there is a pronoun (they) after "than" in (a), while no
pronoun after "than" in (b). I don't know why.

Can I say:

c.
They are published together in a shorter form than were originally published. (Omit "they")

What do you think?


 

GoesStation

No Longer With Us (RIP)
Joined
Dec 22, 2015
Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
American English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
No, but I'm struggling to say why not.
 

kadioguy

Key Member
Joined
Mar 4, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
No, but I'm struggling to say why not.

Can I take them to mean:

a'. They are published together in a shorter form than (the form in which) they were originally published.

b'. There is more food than (the food that) is needed.

The blue parts are understood, so they are omitted. Thus, we get (a) and (b).

What do you think?
 

Charlie Bernstein

VIP Member
Joined
Jan 28, 2009
Member Type
Other
Native Language
English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
I like that. It explains it better than I would have.
 

jutfrank

VIP Member
Joined
Mar 5, 2014
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
England
Current Location
England
a'. They are published together in a shorter form than (the form in which) they were originally published.

That's right, yes. In fact, I think I'd consider the original sentence as incorrect, strictly speaking.

b'. There is more food than (the food that) is needed.

I'd put it like this:

There is more food than [the amount of food] that is needed.
 

kadioguy

Key Member
Joined
Mar 4, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
I'd put it like this:

There is more food than [the amount of food] that is needed.

Did you mean:

There is more food than [the amount of food that] is needed.

If not, I know don't know why the "that" can be kept. Please compare it to:

He worries more than is necessary. (O)

He worries more than it is necessary. (X)
 

jutfrank

VIP Member
Joined
Mar 5, 2014
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
England
Current Location
England
Did you mean:

There is more food than [the amount of food that] is needed.
Yes, I did, sorry. (Why do I seem to make more errors in your threads than in anyone else's?!)
 

kadioguy

Key Member
Joined
Mar 4, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
That's right, yes. In fact, I think I'd consider the original sentence as incorrect, strictly speaking.

If you don't mind, could you please tell me what you would think as correct? Did you mean these two are better than the original?

(A) They are published together in a shorter form than the form in which they were originally published.

(B) They are published together in a shorter form than the form they were originally published.
 

jutfrank

VIP Member
Joined
Mar 5, 2014
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
England
Current Location
England
If you don't mind, could you please tell me what you would think as correct? Did you mean these two are better than the original?

(A) They are published together in a shorter form than the form in which they were originally published.

(B) They are published together in a shorter form than the form they were originally published.

A is correct and B is incorrect.
 

kadioguy

Key Member
Joined
Mar 4, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Taiwan
Current Location
Taiwan
A is correct and B is incorrect.
Thank you for being patient with my questions. :)

So, do you think (F) is incorrect?

(C) The place in which we live.

(D) The place where we live.

(E) The place that we live.

(F) The place we live.
 

jutfrank

VIP Member
Joined
Mar 5, 2014
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
England
Current Location
England
Thank you for being patient with my questions. :)

So, do you think (F) is incorrect?

(C) The place in which we live.

(D) The place where we live.

(E) The place that we live.

(F) The place we live.

Here's my judgement:

C is dubious but possibly okay, depending on context. There ought to be a good reason for the preposition.
D is correct.
E is incorrect.
F is incorrect, strictly speaking. If I'm having a particularly good day, I'll forgive it. Still, I'd count it as poor English.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top