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Gaya87

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Could you check the sentence below, please?

This psychological thriller focuses on the relationship between FBI special investigator Will Graham and Dr. Hannibal Lecter, a forensic psychiatrist destined to become Graham's most cunning enemy.
 

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This psychological thriller focuses on the relationship between FBI special investigator, Will Graham and Dr. Hannibal Lecter, a forensic psychiatrist destined to become Graham's most cunning enemy.
 

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No, tedmc, that's not correct.

You can either set off the name with a pair of commas so it's an appositive (usually the name first and then the title would come after) or leave it with no commas as a type of title, but you cannot use just one comma.
 
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