The day I went to my hometown. It was a bad day. It took 16 hours to get there. I felt tired and boring when i lay in bed in during the journey. The cause of this is traffic jam. The day everybody go to their hometown for the TET holidays in Vietnamese
It would be too complicated and hard to read if I made corrections within each sentence. Here's what I would write:
The last time I took the sleeper bus to my hometown, it was a horrible journey. We got stuck in a traffic jam and my phone battery had died so I had nothing to do for the entire 16-hour journey except lie back and stare out the window. In Vietnam, many people travel back to their hometowns for the Tết holidays - that's why the traffic was so bad.
You're already writing fairly short sentences so I suggest making them simpler for now.
I went to my hometown last weekend.
It took 16 hours to get there.
I travelled on the sleeper bus.
I was bored and tired.
There were traffic jams.
I went home for the Tết holidays.
Concentrate on getting
the basics right. Here are a few of the basic errors you've made in this thread:
In post #1 and post #6, you failed to capitalise the word "I" (first person singular pronoun).
Tarheel asked you "Were you bored?" and you replied with "I were bored". That's not right. The past simple of "be" in the first person singular is "I was".
In post #5, you used a capital letter after a comma even though the word after the comma wasn't a proper noun.
In post #6, you failed to use a closing punctuation mark at the end of a sentence.