Tom was annoyed with so many women

[Bassim]

Have I made any mistakes?

Tom was annoyed with so many women trying to flirt with him that he bought himself a wedding ring to keep them at bay. Nowadays, if he feels that a woman shows the signs of being interested in him, he demonstratively raises his left hand and flashes his ring, which has an immediate effect on the most females, although there are some who don't balk at the ring either.

 

[emsr2d2]

Have I made any mistakes?

Tom was so annoyed with so many women trying to flirt with him that he bought himself a wedding ring to keep them at bay. Nowadays, if he feels that a woman [STRIKE]shows the signs[/STRIKE] is showing signs of being interested in him, he [STRIKE]demonstratively[/STRIKE] raises his left hand and flashes his ring very obviously, which has an immediate effect on [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] most of the [STRIKE]females[/STRIKE] women, although there are some who don't balk at the sight of the ring. [STRIKE]either[/STRIKE]

See above.

 

[Tdol]

How about on most women?