learningspirit
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I have a question about the usage of the preposition "in" here:
"Matt and Sweat used power tools to saw through a steel cell wall and several steel steam pipes, bashed a hole through a 2-foot-thick brick wall, squirmed through pipes and emerged from a manhole outside the Clinton Correctional Facility in Dannemora. Sweat was serving a sentence of life without parole in the killing of a sheriff's deputy in Broome County in 2002. Matt was serving 25 years to life for the killing and dismembering of his former boss."
The act of serving a sentence didn't happen as a part of the killing of a deputy. So, the use of "in" alone seems off. Would replacing "in" with "in connection with" be better?
"Matt and Sweat used power tools to saw through a steel cell wall and several steel steam pipes, bashed a hole through a 2-foot-thick brick wall, squirmed through pipes and emerged from a manhole outside the Clinton Correctional Facility in Dannemora. Sweat was serving a sentence of life without parole in the killing of a sheriff's deputy in Broome County in 2002. Matt was serving 25 years to life for the killing and dismembering of his former boss."
The act of serving a sentence didn't happen as a part of the killing of a deputy. So, the use of "in" alone seems off. Would replacing "in" with "in connection with" be better?