A alpacinou Key Member Joined Sep 30, 2019 Member Type Interested in Language Native Language Persian Home Country Iran Current Location Iran Feb 3, 2021 #1 Is this correct? When he left, her face deflated like a balloon. Suddenly, she looked like a puppy who has lost her toy and nothing would please her.
Is this correct? When he left, her face deflated like a balloon. Suddenly, she looked like a puppy who has lost her toy and nothing would please her.
jutfrank VIP Member Joined Mar 5, 2014 Member Type English Teacher Native Language English Home Country England Current Location England Feb 3, 2021 #2 In the second sentence, use past perfect. Remove the last five words. Consider replacing Suddenly.
A alpacinou Key Member Thread starter Joined Sep 30, 2019 Member Type Interested in Language Native Language Persian Home Country Iran Current Location Iran Feb 3, 2021 #3 jutfrank said: In the second sentence, use past perfect. Remove the last five words. Consider replacing Suddenly. Click to expand... When he left, her face deflated like a balloon. She looked like a puppy who had lost her toy.
jutfrank said: In the second sentence, use past perfect. Remove the last five words. Consider replacing Suddenly. Click to expand... When he left, her face deflated like a balloon. She looked like a puppy who had lost her toy.
jutfrank VIP Member Joined Mar 5, 2014 Member Type English Teacher Native Language English Home Country England Current Location England Feb 3, 2021 #4 Are you happy with that particular combination of similes?
T tedmc VIP Member Joined Apr 16, 2014 Member Type Interested in Language Native Language Chinese Home Country Malaysia Current Location Malaysia Feb 4, 2021 #5 I wouldn't use two similes to describe the same thing.
A alpacinou Key Member Thread starter Joined Sep 30, 2019 Member Type Interested in Language Native Language Persian Home Country Iran Current Location Iran Feb 4, 2021 #6 jutfrank said: Are you happy with that particular combination of similes? Click to expand... Not necessarily.
jutfrank said: Are you happy with that particular combination of similes? Click to expand... Not necessarily.
T Tdol No Longer With Us (RIP) Staff member Joined Nov 13, 2002 Native Language British English Home Country UK Current Location Japan Feb 4, 2021 #7 That had lost its toy?