Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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When Tom discovered in the morning that someone had set his car on fire, he sat beside the burnt out shell and cried as if he had never done before. He hated the thugs who had done this to him. They had done it just for fun and out of malice, and they never cared what damage they did to other people. They knew they would never be caught because the police lacked resources. Tom needed the car for his job as a plumber and he didn't have a clue where he was going to find the money for another one. This was the third time in the last two years his car was torched, and he had enough of it. He walked to the bus, thinking that maybe he should give notice and start living on welfare. When the state didn't protect him, the hard-working man, he shouldn't contribute to it with a single penny.
When Tom discovered in the morning that someone had set his car on fire, he sat beside the burnt out shell and cried as if he had never done before. He hated the thugs who had done this to him. They had done it just for fun and out of malice, and they never cared what damage they did to other people. They knew they would never be caught because the police lacked resources. Tom needed the car for his job as a plumber and he didn't have a clue where he was going to find the money for another one. This was the third time in the last two years his car was torched, and he had enough of it. He walked to the bus, thinking that maybe he should give notice and start living on welfare. When the state didn't protect him, the hard-working man, he shouldn't contribute to it with a single penny.