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Welcome to the forum. :hi:
Please note my corrections to your post above. I have also changed your thread title - it contained incorrect capitalisation of a random word and was ungrammatical. We don't start questions with "Where/How to ...".
Your post contained a surprising number of errors for a native English speaker, especially one whose profile describes them as an academic, and who wants to apply to university. I have a few questions:
- What do you plan to study at university?
- Are you planning to apply to universities in the USA (your home country) or abroad?
- Have you not seen examples of excellent essays during your work as an academic?
- If not, have you looked online to find examples of such essays? We are not, of course, talking about illegal services where people write essays for you. This forum does not support any form of cheating.
