DANAU
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- Apr 19, 2020
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- Chinese
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Hi.
I have constructed the sentence below. Can you please check if it is acceptable.
More specifically, I would like to know if I can start the second part of the sentence with "seeing" after the coma.
"While I was queuing, seeing the satisfied customers fuelling their hunger with different cuisines, it made me want to get my food faster."
I have constructed the sentence below. Can you please check if it is acceptable.
More specifically, I would like to know if I can start the second part of the sentence with "seeing" after the coma.
"While I was queuing, seeing the satisfied customers fuelling their hunger with different cuisines, it made me want to get my food faster."