[General] Will Be and Of

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holdenenglish

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Hi teachers

I've written the following sentence. I'm thinking if I should add "will be" and "of" in this context.

With 1,000 robots processing thousands of parcels and assigning them to over 400 locations in Japan, this type of world-class facility will be the blueprint for what we think will be the further development of China's automated warehouses.

Please advise

Cheers

Holden
 

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With 1,000 robots processing thousands of parcels and assigning them to over 400 locations in Japan, this type of world-class facility will be the blueprint for what, we believe, [STRIKE]think[/STRIKE] will facilitate [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] the [STRIKE]further[/STRIKE] continued development of China's automated warehouses.
Try that.
 
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