World Conference for Women in Beijing.

[Mona Ibrahim]

Please help to check the below sentences and if there is any grammatical issue.

In order to enforce peace’s activities, action should be taken to implement the commitment made by states 15 years ago at the Fourth World Conference for Women in Beijing.

 

[emsr2d2]

Why have you capitalised "peace" and "states"?

 

[Mona Ibrahim]

Why have you capitalised "peace" and "states"?

I have corrected them. Thank you for your notes.

 

[emsr2d2]

What do you mean by "peace's activities"?

 

[probus]

By the way, Mona, "the below sentences" isn't wrong but "the sentences below" is more natural.

 

[Mona Ibrahim]

What do you mean by "peace's activities"?

Activities done to ensure peace for example negotiation between countries and others.

 

[Tdol]

I'd say peace activities. The rest might be a bit optimistic.

 

[emsr2d2]

Mona, please take note of the fact that Rover deleted two of your posts, both of which just said "Thank you". Please don't waste posts on that. There is a perfectly useful "Thanks" button, which you should use instead.