koalachan
Member
- Joined
- Jul 17, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Japanese
- Home Country
- Japan
- Current Location
- Japan
Hi everyone,
Please would anyone be able to check whether the sentence below is grammatically and structurally correct? Will really appreciate your help and time.
''Dear Mr XX,
I am writing to show my interest in entering agreement with yourself in hoping to appoint myself as an exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster. If you are interested in taking this on, please contact me at _______ to explore this further. Thank you.''
Many thanks everyone.
Please would anyone be able to check whether the sentence below is grammatically and structurally correct? Will really appreciate your help and time.
''Dear Mr XX,
I am writing to show my interest in entering agreement with yourself in hoping to appoint myself as an exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster. If you are interested in taking this on, please contact me at _______ to explore this further. Thank you.''
Many thanks everyone.