Walt Whitman
Member
- Joined
- Jan 4, 2012
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
When Lockwood felt better, Zillah, the housekeeper, handed him a candle, took him upstairs to his bedroom and gave him some strange advice: she told him to be quiet, because she was putting him in a room that her master never let anyone use.
Does it sound unnatural to repeat the pronoun “him” so many times?
Is there a better way to write the sentence?
Thank you
WW
Does it sound unnatural to repeat the pronoun “him” so many times?
Is there a better way to write the sentence?
Thank you
WW