[Grammar] you were the one who helped the hobo who was wounded

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

-Excuse me, you were the one who helped the hobo who was wounded in the back of the theater?¡
-Hello, yes, it was me. It was devastating what I had to see
-Yes I know
-The poor old man was lying on the floor, unconscious and bloodied, and one of the dogs wasbarking. The other dog one was dead in the floor.
-Dead?
-Yes, those sordid criminals stabbed the poor animal.

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

-Excuse me, ​were you [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] the one who helped the hobo who was wounded in the back of the theater?
-Hello, yes, it was me. [STRIKE]It was devastating[/STRIKE] I was devastated by what I had to see/what I saw.
-Yes, I know.
-The poor old man was lying on the floor, unconscious and bloodied, and one of the dogs was barking. The other dog [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] was dead [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on the floor.
-Dead?
-Yes, those sordid criminals stabbed/had stabbed the poor animal.

Thanks.

See above.