Your opinion on my essay please? Makeover Programs: Good or Bad?

[cookielover]

Is it color or colour?

[Raymott]

Hi,
Welcome to the forum.
You'll find that people here are reluctant to correct your homework. This is a rule (See the Notices in the box which should be above your post).
Anyhow, your essay looks OK.

[cookielover]

Oh thanks heaps! I must've not seen it. Thanks for the help again.