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    ` Hi please correct

    The neighbors’ new dog is small, quiet, and shy.
    The neighbors’ new dog is small quiet and shy.
    ` The neighbors’ new dog is, small, quiet and shy.


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    Default Re: please correct

    A better title would be The neighbors’ new dog.

    'The neighbours' new dog is small, quiet and shy.'

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    Default Re: please correct

    But the first one is okay also. The serial comma is optional, not wrong.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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