"I am responsible for the management and marketing of SERICO, economics and business information website, to corporate executives and high ranking government officials."
I intended to mean, by writing the above sentence,:
1. responsible for the management of SERICO
2. responsible for the marketing of SERICO to corporate executives and high ranking government officials.
In that context, did I combine the two ideas right in the sentence above?
I am especially wondering about the use of "to" because "to" only applies to the second idea.
Does it in any way affect the first idea?
Thanks
Are you open to a complete rewrite, or do you just want to work on you original sentence?
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
I was thinking what it would be like if I had changed "to" to "targeting".
I would like to hear your expert opinion on that
or if you have any better ideas, please enlighten me.
Thank you.
I prefer to.
[QUOTE=rainous;805531]How about this:
"I am responsible for the management of SERICO's economics and business information website, and for marketing it to corporate executives and high-ranking government officials."
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