Re: Parallelism

Originally Posted by
lucalita009
I have a sentence that is not parallel. Hope you guys can help me to correct it.
- My pet peeves are screeching chalk, buses that are late, and dripping sinks.
Thank you all.
It is essentially parallel. You have three nouns: chalk, buses, and sinks (faucets).
You can increase the uniformity by changing them to the same adjective/noun order.
screeching chalk
late buses
dripping facuets
chalk that screeches
buses that are late
faucets that drip
However, most people aren't that vigilent about parallelism. What would be objectionable non-parallelism would be something like "screeching chalk, when buses are late, and if the faucet drips."
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.