Re: How is my writing style?
Quote:
Originally Posted by
new2grammar
Your writing is fine.
I would appreciate it if you would point out any mistakes. if at all present
Regards,
Rover
Re: How is my writing style?
[QUOTE=new2grammar;851457]
***** NOT A TEACHER *****
New2Grammar,
(1) I agree with the teacher: your writing is awesome!
(2) I do not wish to nitpick (complain about little, unimportant things), but I
feel that I should bring two little matters to your attention:
(a) Some people would prefer a hyphen:
In our modern-day world ....
(i) Some might even advise dropping "day": In our modern world ....
(b) Some people would feel more comfortable with a comma:
...and noticed, but everyone has ....