Re: Please check my paragraph

Originally Posted by
new2grammar
The Life has taught me [that] if you chase perfection you can achieve excellence. I am a man of value with strong values who has never settled for anything but the best. Hence it is my resolute resolution to buy a home that is not just an address but a [place called] paradise that offers the best of amenities & and glorifies the delights of my family.
I have made some corrections above, but only to actual errors. I would probably write the piece itself somewhat different but it is your piece.
For information, "a man of value" means (to me) that you are a valuable man, ie you are worth a lot. I don't think that's what you meant. I think you meant that your values are very important to you.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.