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Topic sentence : Another difference between School and University life is the way of learnin
Another difference between School and University life.
The first difference in the University is ways of learning, you need to use a internet, and visit library to Gather information and reading also learning . but in the School it's so different , usually use a internet and once in a blue moon you visit a library.
University Has a lot of programs so student need to use internet and visit library.
for example , in the University when you have a presentation you need use a computer. also , you must use internet to search about information without internet you can't do anything. Like princess Noura university has computer rooms , library , internet in all university and more…
you must work hard to take a high mark do all homework , and do all the work the teacher ask you to do it.
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Originally Posted by bhaisahab

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Originally Posted by Roaa1

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