Welcome to the forum, Ally.
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I. IntroductionExplain the impact of having a cell phone as ateenager
Thesis Statement: Cell phone use canadversely affect teen driving.
II. Body
A. Frequency of cell phoneuse among teens
1. Texting
2. Calling
3. Emailing
B. Cell phone use ruins teen’s health
1. Ear problem
2. Heart problem
3. Eye problem
C. Cell phone use destroysteens and uses their time
1. Car accidents
2. Games
3. Improper sleep
III. Teenagers have to be more careful withcell phones and use them wisely.
Last edited by ally199212; 25-Oct-2012 at 19:41. Reason: I wanna know if the outline is correct? I need to know as soon as possible... my outline is due in 3 hours
Welcome to the forum, Ally.
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I agree with 5jj, but want to ask you one question. Do your body paragraphs support your thesis statement?
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.