Let's see the whole thing.
The other bullets need to start with a verb.
Quick question - are the following sentences correct English?:
This guide will:
- steer you in the right direction for fastest results, the easiest way.
- ...other benefits...
- ...other benefits...
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Last edited by Casp; 03-Jan-2013 at 02:25.
Let's see the whole thing.
The other bullets need to start with a verb.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Why not: Guide you through INSTEAD of steer you in the right direction?
Do you mean you want to write '... guide you through the right direction"? That doesn't make sense.
I have no problem with "steer", but I would prefer "... steer you in the direction of the easiest, fastest results."
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.
Thanks very much to all of you. I like your suggestion emsr2d2, but I think I will drop the word "easiest" and use this instead:
"This guide will:
- steer you in the right direction for the fastest possible results.
- "
That would be correct English, right? (yes/no please)
Yes.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.