Does this sentence sound nature?

[saloom2]

Hello everyone,

Does this sentence sound naturally?

I'm sorry not to have been in touch earlier, and I feel quite embarrassed, but I was busy with my new boxing training.

Thanks in advance.

[Rover_KE]

Does this sentence sound natural?

I'm sorry not to have been in touch earlier, and I feel quite embarrassed, but I was busy with my new boxing training.

Thanks in advance. (Unnecessary)

Yes, but we don't say 'Does it sound nature?' or 'Does it sound naturally?'

Note that a better title would have been 'I'm sorry not to have been in touch earlier'.

'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.' (Posting Guidelines)

Rover

[saloom2]

I'm so sorry. Anyway, If you have a look at my last question, you will see how my titles presented are improved.