Resume Question

[moeen49]

Hi,

Could you tell me how apprperiate is this section:


Profile:
MCSD IT Professional with over ten years experience in system design and development. Architect, design and develop systems with in-depth knowledge of database, networking and Internet technologies. Has strong analytical and interpersonal skill. Extremely fast learner can usually learn quickly through independent study.

Any help would be appreciated,
Alan

[Tdol]

Profile:
MCSD IT Professional with over ten years' experience in system design and development. Architect, design and develop (These three need changing for me. If architect is a noun for you, then the two following should be designer and developer. If you mean the area, then shouldn't it be architecture?) systems with in-depth knowledge of database, networking and Internet technologies. Has (You could delete the verb- it doesn't add much) strong analytical and interpersonal skills. Extremely fast learner can usually learn quickly through independent study (I'd change this to sound more confident- . Extremely fast learner- able to learn trhough independent study)


Any use?

[moeen49]

Thank you for help.

Do you think this one has right grammar and punchuation?

Profile:

• MCSD IT Professional with over ten years' experience in system design and development

• Architecture, design and develop systems with in-depth knowledge of database, networking and Internet technologies
• Strong analytical and interpersonal skills
• Extremely fast learner- able to learn through independent study

[Tdol]

Architecture, design and development of systems

[moeen49]

It doesn't sound familiar to me. Do you think that I should give-up this part?

[Tdol]

System(s) architecture, design and development

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