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Old 05-Oct-2009, 11:57
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Default help me please I wanna write essay 'why i wanna study in usa?'

Hello i am from russia,and i have to write essay,cause i wanna there....in america.
i should write essay and become the best pupil in my oblast(i dont know how to say)i am like fool in this deal,i know english so so...sorry for my grammar...
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We write "want to" not wanna.
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Thank you:)i know.but i wrote it,cause this ussually using in speech:)
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Please,talk with me about anything more:)
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Well, why do you want to study in the US?
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My mam asked:how old are you?
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I want to study there,because it will be practicing my english.My future job will be connect with english.
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I want to study there,because it will be practicing my english.My future job will be connect with english.
I want to study in the US because it will give me an opportunity to learn English. English will be a requirement for my future job.
So, you've started your essay. You need to jot down more ideas, reasons and wishes and hopes, and add them to the skeleton of an outline you already have.
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I am here:)
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Thank you for your advise....very much:)
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