Revise my CV please!

[Farrukh]

Hello

I would like to request for a help. I wrote me CV sample here, could you please check and give me your comments. I would love your comments.
Thanks beforehand!



Toshev Farrukh

Date of birth: December 24th, 1986
Nationality: Tajik
Martial Status: Single

Objective To implement the best of my knowledge and skills for the benefit of your organization?s goals and principles
Education

Dates: 2004-2009
University: Tajik State University
Specialization: Economics of enterprises
Main courses: Economics, Mathematics, English, and Computer science
Qualifications: Degree of specialist in above field

Dates: 1999-2004
School: Lyceum#1, Istaravshan
Qualifications: Attestation of high school completion

Dates: 1997-1999
School: Lyceum#2, Istaravshan

Dates: 1993-1997
School: Secondary school #20, Istaravshan
Qualifications: Attestation of elementary school completion

Employment

Dates: September 2004 ? present
Company: Relief International Schools on line (RISOL)
Position: On-Site Monitor (OSM)
Responsibilities: Training students of secondary schools, monitoring community access to internet, assist secondary school teachers to participate in forums, leading seminars about computers, internet, importance of English, and others

Dates: August 2004 ? September 2004
Company: Central Asian Development Agency (CADA)
Position: Volunteer
Responsibilities: Help subscribers to open account in E-mail, how to work with it, register them
Skills: Good typing skills in English (40-50 words) and in Russian (20-25 words), customer oriented, good communication skills, ability to work under pressure and independently with little guidance, effective team player, paying spectacular attention to details and following procedures, willing to work overtime if needed.

Computer All Microsoft Office programs (Office 97, 2000, XP, 2003), Adobe Photoshop, Corel Draw, Macromedia Dreamweaver, Internet Explorer, Installation (can install operating systems including: Windows 95, 98, Me, XP), Understand system unit

Languages Tajiki (Native), English (fluent), Russian (excellent), Spanish
(basics)

Achievements

Date: 2003-2004
Award: Finalist of FSAFLEX scholarship

Date: March 2003
Award: 1st place in Regional Olympiad of English

Date: January 2003
Award: Certificate of Computer course completion in Small Business Institute

Interests Improve work skills and learn more about various computer programs, help people to the best of my ability

E-mail:
Tel: (+992 3454) 2 27 79

[Tdol]

Some Ideas

Toshev Farrukh

Date of birth: December 24th, 1986
Nationality: Tajik
Marital Status: Single
Gender?

Objective: To implement the best of my knowledge and skills for the benefit of your organization?s goals and principles
To be honest, I'd change this Objective- flattery will get you nowhere. Why not say what you expect to get out of the job?

Education

Dates: 2004-2009
University: Tajik State University
Specialization: Business Economics
Main courses: Economics, Mathematics, English, and Computer science
Qualifications: Degree of specialist - this doesn't really mean much to me- is it a Bachelor's degree or a Master's? in above field

Dates: 1999-2004
School: Lyceum#1, Istaravshan
Qualifications: Attestation of high school completion

Dates: 1997-1999
School: Lyceum#2, Istaravshan

Dates: 1993-1997
School: Secondary school #20, Istaravshan
Qualifications: Attestation of elementary school completion

Employment

Dates: September 2004 ? present
Company: Relief International Schools on line (RISOL)
Position: On-Site Monitor (OSM)
Responsibilities: Training students of secondary schools, monitoring community access to internet, assisting secondary school teachers to participate in forums, leading seminars about computers, internet, importance of English, and others

Dates: August 2004 ? September 2004
Company: Central Asian Development Agency (CADA)
Position: Volunteer
Responsibilities: Help subscribers to open E-mail accounts, teaching them how to work with it, registering them (for what?)
Skills: Good typing skills in English (40-50 words) and in Russian (20-25 words), customer oriented, good communication skills, ability to work under pressure and independently with little guidance, effective team player, paying close attention to details and following procedures, willing to work overtime if needed.

IT skills: All Microsoft Office programs (Office 97, 2000, XP, 2003), Adobe Photoshop, Corel Draw, Macromedia Dreamweaver, Internet Explorer, Installation (can install operating systems including: Windows 95, 98, Me, XP), Understand system unit (what's this??)

Languages Tajiki (Native), English (fluent), Russian (excellent), Spanish
(basics)

Achievements

Date: 2003-2004
Award: Finalist of FSAFLEX scholarship

Date: March 2003
Award: 1st place in Regional Olympiad of English

Date: January 2003
Award: Certificate of Computer course completion in Small Business Institute

Interests: Improving my professional work skills and learning more about various computer programs, helping people to the best of my ability (is this really an interest?)

E-mail:
Tel: (+992 3454) 2 27 79