Plz check my CV ... Thanks in advance

[phinamdl]

I attacked this file above this topic. Plz read it and give me some advice to me who write again better. Thanks

[Gillnetter]

I attacked this file above this topic. Plz read it and give me some advice to me who write again better. Thanks

It is an interesting piece of work. It might be that some information is expected in your country that would not be expected in mine. Is it required that you list: your place of birth, your matital status, your nationality, and your religion? In addition, the piece could stand a bit of editing. By the way, the correct spelling is please, not plz.