Can You check my letter please? Thank You

[zotyapecs]

My name is ... I'm interested the vacancy for work experience.

I've studied mostly by myself web development but I've graduated a junior PHP course and I have a PHP certificate, also I have a diploma of software operator of computer technology and web-designer.
I would like to improve my work experience and also my computer knowledge.

I'm a 24 years old Hungarian boy. After I've finished my high school I went to work in Liverpool where I could make my first work experience. My goal was there, I can save enough money for my studies and I could learn english. After I done an English academic year course.

I would like to reach a serious knowledge on this area in the future.
I hope I get a chance I could start to improve my knowledge even if I just help to others make their work for easier.

[InnaI]

Hi,

I changed your letter a bit :)

Good luck,
Inna.

My name is ... and I'm interested in the vacancy in Name_Of_The_Firm as a Job_Title.

I'm a highly motivated 24 year old web specialist. Being in the beginning of my way, I have the strongest intent to keep improving my knowledge and experience in the field of web development.

After graduating high school I went to work in Liverpool where I could gain my first work experience. My goal was also to save enough money for English studies. Later on, I have successfully completed a one year English academic course. Dedication, persistence and diligence guided me all along the way of my studies.

My professional education brief summary : in **** (year) I've graduated a junior PHP course and I received a PHP certificate. Also, I have a diploma of software operator of computer technology and web-designer.

I will highly appreciate, if you give me a chance to offer my services as a loyal and responsible worker.

Sincerely yours,
name_and _signature.

[Tdol]

I've graduated a junior PHP course and I have a PHP certificate, also I have a diploma of software operator of computer technology and web-designer.

Which certificates do you have? How qualified are you?

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I've studied mostly by myself web development but I've graduated a junior PHP course and I have a PHP certificate,

I have studied web development largely on my own, but I have also graduated from a junior PHP course and hold a PHP certificate.

(Is there such a thing as a PHP certificate?)

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I'm a 24 years old Hungarian boy. After I've finished my high school I went to work in Liverpool where I could make my first work experience.

I am a 24-year-old male from Hungary. After finishing high school, I had my first work experience in Liverpool, England.

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My goal was there, I can save enough money for my studies and I could learn english.

My goals there were to save enough to continue my studies, and to learn English.