Will anyone check my letter

[axelya]

During my eleven years in the travel and tourism industry, I have worked with large groups, families and individual travelers. As a tour guide and tour manager I am responsible for guiding visitors, catering to all customer needs, planning provisions and itineraries, ensuring the overall safety and enjoyability of my clients experience.

Having grown up in a small outback community, I have a strong understanding of and respect for the area and I am passionate about introducing it to visitors. I am an adventurous person who thrives on developing new trips and making environmental education interesting and accessible. I have a flair for leadership, communication and organisation, and can confidently lead trips for all age groups.

I have extensive guiding experience in Guang Xi area, speak Chinese, English and number of Southwestern Chinese dialects. I also possess the energy, passion and knowledge to be an enthusiastic and responsible tour guide, and I enjoy the opportunity to meet people of all ages and cultures, and to show them just how beautiful this country of ours is.

I am excited about the possibility of joining your innovative company and of working with you to develop the best experience possible

[2010]

During my eleven years in the travel and tourism industry, I have worked with large groups, families and individual travelers. As a tour guide and tour manager, I am responsible for guiding visitors, catering to all customer needs, planning provisions and itineraries, ensuring the overall safety and enjoyability of my clients experience.

Having grown up in a small outback community, I have a strong understanding of and respect for the area and I am passionate about introducing it to visitors. I am an adventurous person who thrives on developing new trips and making environmental education interesting and accessible. I have a flair for leadership, communication and organisation, and can confidently lead trips for all age groups.

I have extensive guiding experience in Guang Xi area, speak Chinese, English and number of Southwestern Chinese dialects. I also possess the energy, passion and knowledge to be an enthusiastic and responsible tour guide, and I enjoy the opportunity to meet people of all ages and cultures, and to show them just how beautiful this country of ours is.

I am excited about the possibility of joining your innovative company and of working with you to develop the best experience possible.

Good one!

[axelya]

2010, thank you very much for your time.

[playful]

I have extensive guiding experience in Guang Xi area, speak Chinese, English and number of Southwestern Chinese dialects.

I have extensive guiding experience in the Guang Xi area, and speak Chinese, English and number of Southwestern Chinese dialects.

You are trying to put too many ideas into your sentences. I would cut most of them into two or three parts that readers can digest.

[playful]

I also possess the energy, passion and knowledge to be an enthusiastic and responsible tour guide, and I enjoy the opportunity to meet people of all ages and cultures, and to show them just how beautiful this country of ours is.

I also have the energy, passion and knowledge to be an enthusiastic and responsible tour guide. I enjoy every chance to meet people of all ages and cultures, and to show them just how beautiful our country is.

[playful]

I am excited about the possibility of joining your innovative company and of working with you to develop the best experience possible

I am excited at the prospect of joining your innovative company and of working with you to develop the best experience possible.

[Gillnetter]

During my eleven years in the travel and tourism industry, I have worked with large groups, families and individual travelers. As a tour guide and tour manager I am responsible for guiding visitors, catering to all customer needs, planning provisions and itineraries, and ensuring the overall safety and enjoyability of my client's experience. (Does planning provisions mean that you make plans for meals? If so, this part should be rewritten.)

Having grown up in a small outback community, I have a strong understanding of, and respect for, the area (Which area is that?) and I am passionate about introducing it to visitors. I am an adventurous person who thrives on developing new trips and making environmental education interesting and accessible. I have a flair for leadership, communication and organisation, and can confidently lead trips for all age groups.

I have extensive guiding experience in the Guang Xi area, speak Chinese, English and number of Southwestern Chinese dialects. I also possess the energy, passion and knowledge to be an enthusiastic and responsible tour guide. and I enjoy the opportunity to meet people of all ages and cultures, and to show them just how beautiful this country of ours is. (If the company is in China this sentence would be correct. If the company is not in China I would change it to, "...how beautiful my country is", or, "...how beautiful China is."

I am excited about the possibility of joining your innovative company and of working with you to develop the best experience possible (Possible for who - you, the company, or the clients?)

Gil